(Fic) Drabble: Loop Swoop Pull

[lullabelle]

Title: Loop Swoop Pull
Author: _lullabelle_
Characters: Rose/Jack
Word Count: 100
Rating: PG
Summary: Jack enjoys being the seductee.
A/N: Thanks be to heddychaa for the quick-draw beta. :)



Rose scrunches her face. She is demonstrating her ability to tie knots in a cherry stem using only her teeth and tongue.

Jack's mind is flicking through the dirty comments he could make the way one would flip through cards in a rolodex. There's nothing subtle in her seduction, but Jack has an appreciation for unsubtlety. Her display is sweet and clumsy, and that ignites his desire far more than her limber tongue.

By the time Rose's face lights in triumph, and she sticks out her tongue to show her accomplishment, the stem is not the only thing in knots.

Comments

[scifiangel.livejournal.com]

I was never able to do that. Good for Rose. Now if the Doctor woukd just let them follow through.

[mtgat]

That was great! :)

[azn-jack-fiend.livejournal.com]

Fantastic visual. I loved this.

[frakkin-addict.livejournal.com]

"Jack's mind is flicking through the dirty comments he could make the way one would flip through cards in a rolodex." - What a great line! I really enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing. :D

[http://users.livejournal.com/_lullabelle_/]

I could never do it either. Thanks the for the comment. :)

[http://users.livejournal.com/_lullabelle_/]

Thanks! :D

[http://users.livejournal.com/_lullabelle_/]

Thank you. :D

[http://users.livejournal.com/_lullabelle_/]

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. :D

[ebineez01.livejournal.com]

...Jack has an appreciation for unsubtlety.
he is the King LOL!
this is lovely - thanks

[http://users.livejournal.com/_lullabelle_/]

Thanks for the comment. :D

[ebineez01.livejournal.com]

friended back BTW - and *love* to the icon :)